The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write the least 150 words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words girls, percent with synonyms.
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