You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher, but you couldn’t return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter, you should: • what book it was • how helpful the book was • explain why you couldn’t return it in time.

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Dear

Mrs.

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Hawkins, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter concerning the book that you had lent me for my Implantology course

last

month. The book is Essential Implantology by

Dr.

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Mohit Salkar,

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provides all the basics regarding implants and

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procedure. It was absolutely generous of you to give me

this

textbook.

Moreover

, everything has been defined extremely well, and

also

the example of each case with photographs has made it even more simple.

Additionally

, it was incredibly helpful for my course which was a practical implementation of

this

manual.

However

, I apologise for the delay but after the course was finished, I had fallen sick and it was really awful.

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, I had

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fever, body ache, and the doctor had recommended to rest adequately. Fortunately, I am feeling better now and everything is back to normal.

Therefore

, I’ll be returning the book back to you personally. I hope you could understand my situation. Thanking you. Yours truly, Shakib Qureshi

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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