The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
As shown in the chart, the vast majority of the
students
both men and women were seeking part-time education. Use synonyms
Overall
, part-time male seekers had reduced in Linking Words
1980s
than the previous ten Change the article
the 1980s
years
by around 200 Use synonyms
students
, and increased slightly after Use synonyms
1980s
, Correct article usage
the 1980s
while
part-time female Linking Words
students
had Use synonyms
rose
by 100 Change the verb form
risen
students
in Use synonyms
1980s
than 1970s, and by 300 Correct article usage
the 1980s
students
in Use synonyms
1990s
than 1980s.
Correct article usage
the 1990s
Although
full-time men were around ten Linking Words
percent
out of the part-time in Change the spelling
per cent
1970s
, Change the article
the 1970s
this
had increased to almost Linking Words
the
quarter of the part-time in Correct article usage
a
1990s
.
Correct article usage
the 1990s
In
the other hand, full-time females had gone up four times in Change preposition
On
1980s
and 1990s than Change the article
the 1980s
1970s
, with a small difference between Correct article usage
the 1970s
1980s
and 1990s, when the Correct article usage
the 1980s
last
ten Linking Words
years
had had Use synonyms
larger
number of Add an article
a larger
students
.
Generally, the female Use synonyms
students
were less than the males in the beginning Use synonyms
years
, which had changed in Use synonyms
the
recent Correct article usage
apply
years
, with more females than males in both part and full-time sections.Use synonyms
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