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Some university students move away and live on their own while they are attending school, but others live at home with their family while they are students. Which do you think is a better choice? Give reasons to explain your answer.

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Education is the backbone of
nation
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the nation
a nation
. A number of pupils live in
dormitory
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a dormitory
dormitories
the dormitory
 during university life while, others attend University and join
class
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the class
a class
 from their
home
.I think that living with parents is better than from
dormitory
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the dormitory
 Parents are the
first
 teacher of any students. Since
childhood parents
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childhood, parents
 have been teaching their
children which
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children, which
 one is good or bad. There are some reasons why I reckon that it is good to join university from
home
.
First
 of all, when students
lives
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live
 in their
home
, they stay under supervision of their parents. They have to maintain discipline and regularly go to University to join their class.
Moreover
, parents can know of their
children
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child's
 educational progress. Sometimes, they give guidelines how to get better results which may not possible if they live in
dormitoy
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dormitories
dormitory
the dormitory
.
Furthermore
, parents can look after their children and provide them well nutritious foods which can make their children energetic, strong and so on. Apart from
home
, students love to live in
dormitory
. There are some reasons why they choose
dormitory
 as their living Place. A
dormitory
 is a place which is
neared
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near
 by
University
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the University
. For
this
 reason, it is automatic Choice them to live in. There are some positive and negative effects on live in
dormitory
.
To begin
 with, a huge number of students live in
dormitory
. For
this
 reason, it has good educational facilities and educational environment. There is a library in
dormitory
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the dormitory
a dormitory
dormitories
 where students go to read books. They Don't purchase all books and can save money.
Moreover
, they can discuss Their studies with their
counterparts which
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counterparts, which
 helps them to achieve a good result.
However
, living with so many students is
also
 a bit risky. Sometimes, they can
misleading
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mislead
 by any political group which will bad impact on their education To sum up,
although
 living in
dormitory
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the dormitory
dormitories
 has some
facilities
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facilities, however
however
, I strongly believe that it is the best option to go to
University
Suggestion
the University
 from their
home
 and living under controlled by their parents.

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