The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart represents the manufacturing operation of
ethanol
fuel using
corn
. There are a total of five steps to be followed up between the storage of
corn
and the storage of pure
ethanol
and these include milling, cooking, fermentation, separation and purification in that particular order. The
corn
is stored first
then
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undergoes a milling procedure which is the first part of the manufacturing process. The milled
corn
is
then
subjected to heating measures and cooked for four hours with the addition of water during the step. The resulting product is
thereafter
fermented for forty-eight hours and after
fermentation
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the produced solution undergoes a separation system which produces two elements,
that is
a
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solid
by product
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and a liquid fuel addressed as
ethanol
. The produced liquid fuel is purified for a period of five hours. Once the purification process is completed, the pure
ethanol
is afterwards stored
subsequently
awaiting the level of transportation. The
next
stage of the process is transportation to relevant ports.
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