The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart represents the manufacturing operation of
ethanol
fuel using corn
. There are a total of five steps to be followed up between the storage of corn
and the storage of pure ethanol
and these include milling, cooking, fermentation, separation and purification in that particular order.
The corn
is stored first then
undergoes a milling procedure which is the first part of the manufacturing process. The milled Correct word choice
and then
corn
is then
subjected to heating measures and cooked for four hours with the addition of water during the step. The resulting product is thereafter
fermented for forty-eight hours and after fermentation
the produced solution undergoes a separation system which produces two elements, Add a comma
,fermentation
that is
a
solid Change the article
apply
by product
and a liquid fuel addressed as Add a hyphen
by-product
ethanol
. The produced liquid fuel is purified for a period of five hours. Once the purification process is completed, the pure ethanol
is afterwards stored subsequently
awaiting the level of transportation. The next
stage of the process is transportation to relevant ports.Submitted by rue.mawoza on
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