Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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university student which mean you are learning the knowledge that you will use to find yourself a job and make money from it
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are many opinions about what students should learn in university
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some said that all students should study whatever they like and there are others who believed that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future like
science
and technology
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Both of these views
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have
their own right and wrong
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As you
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know
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science
and technology are vital and play an indispensable part in
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modern society
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the quality of human
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has been increased
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In the ancient time
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people have to do every
things
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thing
with the simple tools which is very frustrated and since we got
science
and technology works can be done by robots and computer so it labour-saving
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more, in
many other industries like agriculture
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medical
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science
and
teachnology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
play a huge role either
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Even though
physical life is important
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mental health is
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essential
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Eventually the students who like to study other subjects like art
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musical
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music
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acting
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should be respected too
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Therefore, students
should be free to learn whatever they want to
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but still need to know if they good at it or not so they don’t be blind
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it
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All in all
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these both views have the positive and negative sides and I agree with both of
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these points
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of views to some extent
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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