The table illustrates the proportion of the monthly household income of five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the five different European
countries
spend their household income on food
and drinks, housing, clothing and entertainments
. It is immediately apparent all five Fix the agreement mistake
entertainment
countries
spent most of the
household income on Change the word
their
food
and drinks and housing.To begin
with, France, Germany and UK spend majority
of their income on housing, at 31%, 33% and 37% respectively. Add an article
the majority
a majority
In contrast
, they spend around a quarter on food
and drink. Opposite
was true for Turkey and Spain they spend Add an article
The opposite
large
amount on Add an article
a large
food
and drinks, at 36% and 31%, and on housing, at 20% and 18% respectively.On the other hand
, all five countries
spend much less on the
clothing and entertainment. France and Spain spend less than 10%. Correct article usage
apply
While
the other three countries
spend the same around the
13%. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, Germany spend
most on the clothing, at 19 % Change the verb form
spends
whereas
UK and Turkey spend half of the amount.In conclusion, Housing was largest
expenditure item for France, Germany and UK Correct article usage
the largest
while
the food
and drink was biggest
expenditure for Turkey and Spain.Change the article
the biggest
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