You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: ● introduce yourself ● explain what sort of job you would like ● say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am Karthik Kumar, an international student at the
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of Oxford and my major is Business administration. I am originally from India will be staying in Japan for
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couple of years. To support my education cost and gain some work experience. I am seeking
for
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a
Part
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time
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job
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position. I am
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writing
to express my interest to get registered to your employment agency as I am looking for a suitable
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time
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job
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. I am hoping you would enter my details in your database and notify me of suitable
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openings and forward my CV to esteemed
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employers
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. I can work as an administrative assistant, customer service manager or as a sales manager in
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shop. I can spare
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from 5PM onwards on weekdays and Full
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on weekends. I have previously worked as
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support office in a call centre in India and Sales executive in a supermarket in India. Herewith, I have attached my curriculum vitae with
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letter for your kind consideration which
further
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details
of
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my education and work experience. I look forward to hearing from you
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the details process to register with your
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agency. Thank you in advance. Yours
failthfully
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faithfully
, Karthik Kumar T
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