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First impressions are important Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing the position To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Few of the masses believe that foremost affects are imperative, Indeed, believe good performance while interacting is essential for confirming the slot. In
this
 essay, I shall examine the view and suggest my opinion.
Although
, it is just as crucial to have
good
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a good first impression
first
 impression so to matter a
lot
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lot, however
however
, the cognitive understanding should be cohesive and coherent. To illustrate, the interaction between the interviewee and the interviewer would
last
 for seconds, if the
first
 and foremost misunderstanding occurs.
Moreover
, it is vital to be attentive
to details
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to, details
such
 as looking presentable and well organized in communication skills as well as physical appearance.
Therefore
, to draw
first
 impression it is necessary to have a clear understanding of the requirements and should do
accordingly
 failing which could result negatively. For an example, there was an interview in an office for the recruitment of Male nurse and there was no proper conduction of an interview process,
hence
 a candidate of different background directly walked
in
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into
CEO‘s cabin
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the CEO‘s cabin
a CEO‘s cabin
, which resulted in a bad impression on both parties. In some of the
cases physical
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cases, physical
 presentation matters not only creates
thoughtfulness but
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thoughtfulness, but
also
 produces
synergistic effect
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a synergistic effect
. In conclusion, I firmly believe that a person should presentable and organized
this
 could bring positive vibes for the interviewer. Where as unnecessary flattery could impact negatively and
lastly it
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lastly, it's
lastly it's
 very important to have balanced interview interaction where both the parties interact coherent and cohesive.

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