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People today are increasingly use credit card to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to the advent of technology, uses of
credit
 cards ha
ve been gaining p
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have gained
opularity. In my perception, the benefits of plastic money outweigh the drawbacks because not only does it improve standard of living, but
also
 they are at no risk of ro
bbery victim.
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a robbery victim
 Admittedly, plastic money ha
ve v
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has
arious negatives. One of them is ha
cking.
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hacked
Pe
ople having
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The people having credit card
credit
card
 se
em t
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seems
o be at a greater risk of being hacked. If any stranger come to know the password and the
card
 details, he will able to use it without the knowledge of end users. Another drawback is expenses they made are not paid on du
e date.
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the due date
To elucidate, ba
nk o
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banks
the bank
f
ten mention s
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often mentions
p
ecific time t
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a specific time
o
credit
card
 holder to make expenses they made. If they fail in making payment on time, they will be included in the list of de
faulter b
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defaulters
y the banks which will affect their cr
editworthiness.
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credit worthiness
 Despite aforementioned disadvantages, I believe
credit
card
 benefit to end-users in different ways. One of them is to get rid of being robbery victim. To exemplify, the owner of plastic money does not require to carry he
avy liquid amount w
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a heavy liquid amount
ith him all the time, meaning that they tend to use
ca
rd i
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the card
n any emergency situation without worrying about cash arrangement. An
other p
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Other
ositive aspects is improvement in standard of living. Augmenting people seem to get lo
an e
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loans
asily from the banks to purchase ho
use hold i
a social unit living together
household
tems
such
 as washing machines, refrigerators, laptops on the monthly instalment basis. Due to
this
 they are able to improve their standard of living.
For example
, the news report by BB
C i
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the BBC
n March 2019 found that 70% from middle or lower class are able to get better life due to easy instalment method by banking section. In conclusion, even though there are many downsides to having
cr
edit
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a credit card
card
 like ri
sk o
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the risk
f hacking and labeling as defaulter, I think that better living standard and not being a victim of robbery ar
e m
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is
ore imperative benefits.
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