Q. Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young university students, others think sending young people to universities only lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

With the advanced education, the

number

of

undergraduate

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undergraduates

has been increasing. Some insist that a

number

of

university

students only result in rising an unemployment rate of graduates and it is not beneficial for

society

.

Although

I understand

this

opinion, I would argue that the large proportion of undergraduates has positive effects on

society

. Admittedly, there are some disadvantages to the increasing

number

of

university

student

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students

.

To begin

with, many young people may put pressure on themselves to have a bachelor's degree even though it is not necessary.

For example

, in Korea, almost people in modern

society

tend to go to the

university

after being graduated from high school. Because of

this

tendency, some people could apply for admission to

university

without enough thinking what they want to be.

Therefore

, if those could graduate from

university

, they are likely to be unsatisfied with their major. In

this

sense, a lack of confidence with their major could lead to frequent failures in finding decent jobs.

As a result

,

this

tendency to demand higher education could not only increase graduate unemployment rate, but

also

cause individuals to lose time and money.

However

, I still believe that well-educated people influence

society

positively. Programmes aimed at preparing global competition for employment help

university

students to find high quality jobs.

This

is because

university

students can improve their ability through these programmes, competing with their peers and obtaining expertise in their field. It is a proved fact that intelligent people can bring about more benefits for economic growth than physical workers.

In addition

, strengthening individuals' ability in terms of their major can successfully contribute to social outcomes

such

as health care or technology industries.

As a result

, developing the level of education will lead to a national growth more and more in many ways. In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, the increasing

number

of graduates might have a negative effect on both individuals and

society

, but I believe that

this

should be seen as a positive development in many ways.