There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company.

Dear Sir, I am a regular user of your transportation service and take your
buses
to travel to and from my office. I am writing to bring to your attention a few critical issues inflicted upon me and other commuters who use your service. I am hoping you would address these issues promptly.
First
, during the
last
couple of weeks, your
buses
are making recurring delays and
this
is affecting our arrival in our workplaces on time. To add more grief, a few
buses
do not arrive at all. A number of times, I had to wait for more than an hour and
then
hail a taxi to reach my office.
Finally
, some
buses
are full when they arrive and cannot take any more
passenger
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from the Victoria Stand.
This
situation forces me and many other travellers to either take the congested bus and stand all the way in a miserable condition or wait for the
next
bus. I believe
this
would reduce people's trust in your service. I suggest that you add a few more transport to accommodate the passengers and manage the timetable rigidly. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, Sam

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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