There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company.

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Dear Sir, I am a regular user of your transportation service and take your

buses

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to travel to and from my office. I am writing to bring to your attention a few critical issues inflicted upon me and other commuters who use your service. I am hoping you would address these issues promptly.

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, during the

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couple of weeks, your

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are making recurring delays and

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is affecting our arrival in our workplaces on time. To add more grief, a few

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do not arrive at all. A number of times, I had to wait for more than an hour and

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hail a taxi to reach my office.

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, some

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are full when they arrive and cannot take any more

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from the Victoria Stand.

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situation forces me and many other travellers to either take the congested bus and stand all the way in a miserable condition or wait for the

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bus. I believe

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would reduce people's trust in your service. I suggest that you add a few more transport to accommodate the passengers and manage the timetable rigidly. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, Sam

Mon Apr 13 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adhering to schedules
inconvenience
daily routine
punctuality
frequency during peak hours
overcrowding
commuters
update system
reliable
maintenance
breakdowns
irregular bus timings
passengers
delays
unreliable
appointments

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