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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge.In the future,job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the current labour
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market, having
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is more vital than
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concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
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.In the future job candidates
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may be employed without needing formal qualifications.I completely disagree with
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because appropriate
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 might be needful in some cases.
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 of all
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a plenty of professions require
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due to the fact that without knowing a
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it is impossible to apply for jobs as: engineering, architecture, accountant and so on.
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if someone wants to work as a bookkeeper
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he will have to learn
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rather than master practical skills.
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, having learnt something written in the book
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will lead to a great success in the work.A person, who has cognition in his activity will be instantly hired
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compared to the one who does not.
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 of all, knowing a
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 has its advantages.Anyone who has
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 in some kind of sphere
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would have an opportunity to take part in conferences.
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, they will rather be elected to a
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if somebody possesses good
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he will be chosen to participate in scientific researches
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or to have an internship abroad.
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in some cases it would be better to have practical abilities than a
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.It is known that
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in order to be a doctor or a professional sports player
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there is no demand of a
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.Some surgeons are able to conduct toughest operations without having
knowledge
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but with practical skills.Or a good football player does not have to know the history of football
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or something similar. To sum up,I pen down saying that,it is necessary to have theoritical
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,but some workers might not need it in specific jobs
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