You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants athe meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in order to give feedback after my company's meeting, which was happening in your hotel
last
week. All Check the Essay New Essay IELTS Writing Evaluation Premium access to Speaking9 Sign up with the same email or use the coupon code to get a 100% discount: WRITING9 my
colleagues were appreciated by your hotel, particularly in Capitalize word
My
kind
atmosphere which was done by your staff, modern Add an article
the kind
a kind
arhitecture
and design of the hall, rooms, the Correct your spelling
architecture
dinning
room, the meeting room. Everything there is done in Correct your spelling
dining
modern
style Correct article usage
a modern
what
is important nowadays. But Correct pronoun usage
which
also
I would like to tell you about the problems with which my team had met during the lunch. First of all, if it is possible, add different juices, because you said you have european
cuisine, but we couldn't find any juices. Change the capitalization
European
Also
most of the Add a comma
Also,
part
of our team were vegans and when I arranged our meeting with your manager I told her about Fix the agreement mistake
parts
this
. Unfortunately, this
part of the people were unhappy about such
fact
. I am kindly asking you to Correct article usage
a fact
work
on these problems such
as juices, what is important on
meetings and at launches. What is more Change preposition
at
to
Change the verb form
working
work
on vegan's
menu Correct article usage
a vegan's
what
is really important nowadays too, because there are Correct pronoun usage
apply
lot's
of people who have Change the noun form
lots
lot
such
lifestyle
for well-doing Correct article usage
a lifestyle
work
of your hotel. Looking forward to work
with you again. Yours faithfully, Maria IvanovaChange the verb form
working
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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