You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants athe meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in order to give feedback after my company's meeting, which was happening in your hotel
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my
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colleagues were appreciated by your hotel, particularly in
kind
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the kind
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atmosphere which was done by your staff, modern
arhitecture
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architecture
and design of the hall, rooms, the
dinning
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dining
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room, the meeting room. Everything there is done in
modern
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a modern
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style
what
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is important nowadays. But
also
I would like to tell you about the problems with which my team had met during the lunch. First of all, if it is possible, add different juices, because you said you have
european
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cuisine, but we couldn't find any juices.
Also
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most of the
part
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of our team were vegans and when I arranged our meeting with your manager I told her about
this
. Unfortunately,
this
part of the people were unhappy about
such
fact
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. I am kindly asking you to
work
on these problems
such
as juices, what is important
on
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meetings and at launches. What is more
to
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work
on
vegan's
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menu
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is really important nowadays too, because there are
lot's
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of people who have
such
lifestyle
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a lifestyle
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for well-doing
work
of your hotel. Looking forward to
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with you again. Yours faithfully, Maria Ivanova
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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