The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These two maps illustrate the current condition and future plan for Islip
town
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center
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. There are many differences in
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the future
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plan
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for
development
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the development
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of
Islip
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the Islip
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town
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center
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.
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the current situation of Islip
town
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center
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, there is one main
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and two side roads which are connected to
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the school
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and
park
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respectively. Between side roads, the shops are located along
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both sides of
main
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the main
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road
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.
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is located
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the northern
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of
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town
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the town
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center
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behind the shops. In the southern
area
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, most of
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the lands
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lands
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are
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covered by housing. In the new planned development, many infrastructure developments have been made
on
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the prediction stage.
Most
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common attraction is the circular ring
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with dual roadway which is mostly connected to
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of
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the planned
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area
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. The original main
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in
planned
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the planned
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circular ring
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is projected to pedestrian way. Obvious changes had
made
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in the northern part. All the shops are grouped into
shopping
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the shopping
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center
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centers
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.
Bus
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station and car
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are
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planned to be built to the west and east of
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the shopping
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center
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.
Beside
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car
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the car
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park
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,
new
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housing project is
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involved.
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the southern part of
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town
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the town
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center
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, there are no big changes. There will be previous shop stalls and a shrink of the
area
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of
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park
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the park
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and a little extension in the
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of
school
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the school
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. The rest
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is for the purpose of previous housing and new housing. In conclusion, between
current
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map and
future
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the future
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planned map, many modifications are predicted. Many infrastructures are planned to be built for the prediction of
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population growth, transportation and development.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, center, road, park, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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