Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in regard of my luggage have been lost during the flight on March 10th. I was hoping that you could help me find it. Going to London from Frankfurt, I took a handbag with me on board, put it on a shelf under my head. Since I had a 3-hour straight flight, I decided to sleep. Unfortunately, due to the bad weather
conditions
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I was not able to relax.
As a result
, I was exhausted leaving the plane and, by mistake, left my
bag
on it. It is a small brown
bag
with a gold Calvin Klein logo on its right side. It contained some of my clothes, a book Mystery of Madam Hopkins and, what is the most important to me, my laptop. The computer is extremely valuable to me because there is my speech on it which I have to present during tomorrow's conference. As you understand, I urgently need my
bag
back. I am staying in the Central hotel and would appreciate
if
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you could find the
bag
and return it to me as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you
in
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your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Olha Yevtushenko.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
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