Some people feel that entertainers(e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid.

As we know that day by day the entertainment
programes
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
are increasing due to which the entertainers are paid much more as compare to their demands.Entertainers
are always entertain
Suggestion
are always entertaining
always entertain
are always entertained
have always entertained
us whether we are happy or we are sad. As per my
opinion I
Accept comma addition
opinion, I
agree we from the above line as we are paying more to them as required because they are giving their performance to make us happy or feel very comfortable
at
Suggestion
in
the
programe
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
program
programme
programs
which is being
orgainised
being a member of or formed into a labor union
organised
organized
reorganized
. As the another question is asked that "which other type of job should be highly paid" As per me the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
job to whom we should pay is Defence because they are the fighters who are always at the borders fir securing
lur
of or belonging to us
our
lives. They should be paid
highly
Suggestion
higher
as they are real
heros
a man distinguished by exceptional courage and nobility and strength
heroes
of the countries real
saviers
a person whose occupation is to serve at table (as in a restaurant)
servers
selves
and real entertainers for the countries. If they are there we are
alwys
at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
happy any stay with our family and always enjoy the festivals and other social
programes
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
. So the real
heros
a man distinguished by exceptional courage and nobility and strength
heroes
hero
and much more money should be paid to the soldiers.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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