The line chart shows fish and meat consumption in Europe from 1979 to 2004
The line chart depicts the expenditure
of
fish and other types of Change preposition
on
meat
of a nation in Europe over the period of 25 years
from 1979 to 2004. From the graph, it is obvious that the amount of chicken’s
Change noun form
chicken
meat
made up the first place for the most consumption while
other meat
such
as beef and lamb had an opposite trend. On the contrary
, the figure of
fish seems to have stayed unchanged through those Change preposition
for
years
.
Looking into more details, the consumption of chicken’s
Change noun form
chicken
meat
started from nearly 150 in 1979 and grew continuously until it peaked over
250 and seemed to have stayed stable in the Change preposition
at over
last
few years
. In terms of fish, with the
amount of over 50 in 1979, it remained the same data until 2004.
Correct article usage
a
On the other hand
, beef’s
consumption reached Change noun form
beef
at
over 200 in the first year of the period, but it fluctuated and peaked at nearly 250 in 1984 before decreasing dramatically Change preposition
apply
at
100 in 2004. Change preposition
to
Similarly
, the expenditure of
lamb started with the amount of 150 and Change preposition
on
then
, it went down considerably by nearly 100 at 50 in the last
years
of the period.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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