The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

Over the past 15

years

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the

number

of graduated

women

and

men

has been increasing more than decreasing and

this

tendency of rising in the

number

of

graduate

students points its peak in 2007.

Although

both genders mark

increase

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in the

number

of graduates, all the way down it is noticeable that more

women

finish their education successfully than

men

, especially in the past 5

years

, when the

number

or

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graduates from the gentle sex has risen drastically. From the very beginning of

this

chart till the end there is no point in which the gap between

women

and

men

is smaller than in the first recorded data. It is

unchangeable

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tendency that more people from the gentle gender

graduate

university

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than from the strong one. During the period of 15

years

, the

number

of

graduate

women

is progressively increasing with only one downfall between 1995 and 1998 but

this

state does not remain for a long time and after 1998 it starts to ascend in the

number

again.

Although

men

mark

an

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arousal in the

number

of successfully graduating individuals in long term, their way is marked with more downfalls than

the

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women

’s. It is obvious that in the period between 1995 and

2002

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the

number

of

graduate

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men

is changeable and

in

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no point is higher than that in 1995 – the year before the beginning of

decrease

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. In conclusion, both genders have increased the

number

of successfully finishing their education individuals, despite

of

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the fact that

women

mark greater progress over the

years

.