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The given line graph demonstrates average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in four countries, namely the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of four decades, commencing on 1967.

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The given line graph demonstrates average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per
person
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 in four countries, namely the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of four decades, commencing from 1967. Generally speaking, the United Kingdom saw the highest levels of average CO2 emissions per
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 among those countries during
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 period. Simultaneously, in Portugal, it remained at a relatively low level compared with the figures for other countries at the same years. As it is seen from the graph, the average CO2 emissions per
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 in the UK showed a downward trend with around 11 metric tonnes in 1967, and fell gradually to approximately 9 metric tonnes in 2007.
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, the figures for Italy and Portugal depicts an opposite trend. In 1967, only under 2 metric tonnes of CO2 emissions had been found in Portugal,
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 it steadily increased to almost 5 metric tonnes by 1997. After that, it remained stable until 2007.
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, Italy has recorded just over 4 metric tonnes in 1967. Following by a rapid rise, it increased to 6 metric tonnes within 10 years,
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 it climbed slowly to almost 8 metric tonnes and plateaued till the end of
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 period. Sweden had experienced more fluctuations. In 1967, Sweden emitted about 9 metric tonnes CO2 per
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, while it quickly hit its peak reaching up to 10 metric tonnes in 1977. In the following 30 years, it dropped down to under 6 metric tonnes, which was as the same amount as Portugal.

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