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The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers.

The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers.
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The diagram gives information about the process of shaping
glass
 containers.
Overall
, making a
glass
container
 includes
9-different
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9 different
 actions
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Firstly
,
glass
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the glass
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 comes
to
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with
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special
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the special
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 stove that it burns
with
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at
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 105 temperatures.
Then
, liquid
glass
 goes to
former
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the former
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 and presses with a model of
glass
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the glass
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container
.
After
this
,
hot
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the hot
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glass
 is
putted
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put
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 in the
second
 mould in order to make a thick wall of a
container
.
Next
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this
 half-
container
 is filled with air. There it takes the shape of
the
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glass
.
Furthermore
,
unready
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an unready
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container
 goes into the oven and burns
with
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at
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 482 temperatures and
then
 goes
for
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to
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cooling
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the cooling
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 machine,
here
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where
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 its temperature decreases up to 25 within 60 mins.
Finally
, these
glass
 containers are checked by the worker and accepted ones are packaged into boxes
while
 unsuitable ones go for recycling.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, container with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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