You were recently helped by an employee at the airport. Write to the airport to Describe the problem Talk about how you were helped Suggest how to reward the employee

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to appreciate the efforts of your employee, Mr Johnes Voltak, who helped me to catch my
flight
during my
last
trip to Seattle, Washington from Vancouver, BC. On June 20th, 2019 while I was on my way to the airport, I saw one accident happened and the patient was in the severe condition.
Thus
, I was not able to resist myself and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
went to the hospital to offer some support.
As a result
, I got late, and
flight
Suggestion
the flight
was about the take off when I reached at the airport. I just wanted to let you know that your staff is very helpful. Upon reaching the airport, I talked with Mr Johnes and he immediately called the
flight
officer to delay the
flight
for half an hour.
Moreover
, he accompanied me to the aeroplane to prevent
further
delay. I hope you will do your best to appreciate the service of
this
gentleman.
However
, I believe you should offer him some sort of pay raise or promotion. By doing so, he will definitely show the same behaviour in the future as well. Yours faithfully, Jaspreet Kaur

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