Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform what are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform.

Undoubtedly
uniform
made everyone unique. Various Institutes are providing
uniform
to their workers. It has multiple merits and demerits. These both points will be discussed in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
To embark on,
firstly
, when employees wear equal
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
dresses. It develops the equality, no discrimination and enhance discipline among team members.
For
instance some
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instance, some
colleagues wear costly clothes and it arises conflict between those
person
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people
persons
who do not wear it and if
individuals attriee
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the individuals' tree
individuals tree
an individuals' tree
individuals' tree
individuals' attriee
individual attriee
is same. It shows cooperation, professionalism and coordination.
Secondly
, it helps the company for their advertisement and masses attract towards it.
Therefore
, they save the money on promotion of them. It can be clearly seen in
buses crowded area
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a bus crowded area
bus crowded area
bus crowded areas
the bus crowded area
where anyone
wear
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wears
a
uniform
and people read the logo on it.
In addition
to
this
, people can
also
save money on clothes and it
reduce
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reduces
the confusion of what to wear
daidaily
causing or capable of causing death
deadly
that's why it save the time of people.
On the other hand
, if anything
give
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gives
benefits than it has few drawbacks.
Initially
it causes boredom and reduce enthusiasm because everyone wants change. Inspired
of
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by
that, they would become less updated towards trendy clothes and fashion. To conclude, I pen down it has more positivity to wearing a
uniform
rather than
setback
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set back
wearing a
uniform
shows different field in
carrier
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a carrier
the carrier
.

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