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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities
Nowaday
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Nowadays
 millions of online shops are doing
business
 and
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
 rapidly. The majority of traditional
shops concern
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shops, concern
 if they will bankrupt soon due to the fast growing online shopping.
However some
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However, some
 people argue that a great deal of shops can still survive.
Firstly
, the online shops
always offer
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always offers
is always offering
 a very competitive price in order to obtain more and more consumers. They can always provide attractive promotion and sell the products
in
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at
 bottom price because they do not have to pay the extra rental for the physical shops.
For example
, in my own country the daily
turn over
the ratio of the number of workers that had to be replaced in a given time period to the average number of workers
turnover
 of Tao Bao
on line
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
 shop is about 10 million, which is an astonishing amount.
Secondly
 the people are keen on shopping on
internet
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the internet
 because it can save time. Especially the young generation
are
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is
 likely to browse the website of the shops at home in a comfortable atmosphere. They may flexibly select the goods that they like without the persuading from the
shopstaff
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shop staff
. They can
also
 compare the prices between
various shops
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the various shops
 due to price-checking system.
However
, some people said the traditional shops would still have their opportunities to retain their
business
. They suggest the owners of the chain stores or department stores can build up the online shops as well so as to maintain a stable
business
. Actually, there a lot of shops that have built up their online shops,
such
 as the renowned sport shop Nike. All the shops should look for a correct manner to increase their
business
. All in all, it is difficult to say that what is the advantage or disadvantage
for
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of
 online shopping. In my opinion, the owners of
business
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the business
businesses
 should attain to check the trend of the
business
 and quote a best price for keeping the purchasers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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