Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often argued by some people that children’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and moral values should be

responsibility

Suggestion

the responsibility

of school education, while others claim that teachers should teach exclusively academic disciplines. Both sides have their valid arguments. In my opinion, it is necessary to teach children some ethics in school, because some of them do not have any opportunity to get upbringing from their parents. Examining the former opinion, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that

school curriculum

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the school curriculum

should teach students how to follow the code of the

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

because

exclusively

Suggestion

exclusive

academic training, is not the main component of a child’s bright future. Good manners will be useful to a person in all areas of his

life

Accept comma addition

life, such

such

as work, communication with people and social life. It helps categorize different values

such

integrity discipline

Suggestion

integrity, discipline

and honesty among others and apply them in daily lives, it

also

influences

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and allows an individual to make the right choices.

For instance

, a programme called 'Primary Ethics' is now

taught to around

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taught around

20,000 students in more than 300 schools. It introduces discussion of moral issues in

systematic way

Suggestion

a systematic way

On the contrary

, opponents’ view suggests that teachers are not responsible for teaching someones

children

Suggestion

child

how to behave and they already have enough of their work to do. Activities

such

as preparing material for the lesson, checking copy books, making and checking the exams take a considerable amount of their time. It will be stressful for teachers if,

in addition

to academic work, they need to perform upbringing tasks as well. It is primarily the responsibility of parents to provide their

child

Suggestion

children

with the right moral values. In conclusion, teachers play a significant role in

students

Suggestion

student

students'

student's

life and it is essential to provide children with education of moral values and ethics.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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