You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family or six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Madam, My name is Ayoola Ogunleye. I am writing with regards to the live-in nanny advert placed in the Australian Lifestyle magazine on 18th November
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2018. Let me explain my reasons for picking
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interest in
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work, amongst many other ones I came across. I recently moved to Griffith and I was on the lookout for a job that offers free accommodation
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since the rent in
this
city is extremely high. As
such
,
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job is a perfect fit for me. I believe I am the best candidate for
this
job because I love children. About five years ago, I resigned from my business consulting career after I came to the realization that I am passionate about caring for children. In the
last
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for children, with excellent recommendations. During my free time, I would like to travel to the Amazon forest in Australia.
In addition
, I love spending my free afternoons meditating by the beach shore as well as shopping and watching movies, most especially science fiction movies. I do hope to hear from you soon.
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faithfully, Ayoola Ogunleye
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advertisement
  • live with
  • look after
  • six-year-old child
  • suitable
  • employ
  • free time
  • Australia
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