The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be resolved?
It is a bitter truth that lots of balanced and healthy diet can control
people
are suffering from the
serious diseases like high blood pressure, Correct article usage
apply
obesity
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and obesity
due to
overweight
. There are myriad reasons behind Add a missing verb
being overweight
this
deplorable condition. I will discuss some of them in the following paragraph and try to give some solution
as well. First of all, lack of physical activity in daily routine is a primary reason for the overweight issue. Technology and Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
Automobile
revolution makes Correct article usage
the Automobile
people
's life effortless. For example
, Since the invention of the motorbike or the car, people
are
using it to travel very small Wrong verb form
have been
distance
in place of Fix the agreement mistake
distances
cover
the Wrong verb form
covering
distant
by walking. Replace the word
distance
Additionally
, unbalanced
diet Correct article usage
an unbalanced
also
increases the
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apply
weight
dramatically. From the University research, It has been proven that too much consumption of junk food increases the weight
significantly because it is too heavy for the digestive system. By
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In
this
way, People
are getting overweight. Besides
, regular physical exercise can reduce the possibility of getting overweight related
issues. Add a hyphen
overweight-related
For example
, Daily
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a Daily
thirty minutes
walk may put you in pink-full health for decades and helps to control the Correct your spelling
thirty-minute
weight
of the body. Moreover
,Add an article
a
the
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apply
weight
. For example
, Taking the
fruits or Correct article usage
apply
ample
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apply
vegetable
in the diet and Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
avoid
fast food like Pizza, Wrong verb form
avoiding
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or Burger
Burger
as much as possible. Fix the agreement mistake
burgers
To sum up
, Overweight is a serious problem but It can be possible to avoid by doing exercise regularly and taking healthy food. Overweighting is a disease which can happen because of human errors.Submitted by bhullarkamal23 on
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