The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarise the information by selecting main features and make comparison where relevant
The diagrams
gives
information about the Change the verb form
give
next
decisions of the UK’s graduates
and postgraduates
who finished study
, except choosing
Change preposition
for choosing
full time
Add a hyphen
full-time
working
, in 2008. Replace the word
work
Overall
, it can be seen, the number of postgraduates
were
roughly 10 times less than Change the verb form
was
graduates
; whereas
, the trends showed similar patterns.
The most
Correct article usage
Most
students
, who finished colleges
, chose Fix the agreement mistake
college
further
study
, clearly 29665 students
. Meanwhile, it was about 8 times more than students
who chose participating
in voluntary work, 3500. At that time, selectors of part-time work and unemployment were on average, 17735 and 16235, respectively.
In terms of Change the verb form
to participate
postgraduates
, they were nearly 10 times less than college graduates
. In 2008 the
most Correct article usage
apply
postgraduates
chose either further
study
or part-time
job, who were 2725 and 2535, respectively. On contrary, 345 Correct article usage
a part-time
students
tried voluntary activities. Whereas
, 1625 postgraduates
have no jobs.
In summary, both tables shows
common patterns; Change the verb form
show
while
, the
most Correct article usage
apply
graduates
have enrolled further
Change preposition
in further
study
, the least ones have decided to do voluntary works
.Fix the agreement mistake
work
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