You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Hi Ellen, Hope you have adapted to the new country well and must be having a really fun time. I feel ecstatic and thrilled to share that I too have got selected for Masters in Statistics from Northwest University, California with sessions starting

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spring. As childhood friends, ever since you left for California we have longed for each

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companionship.

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our prayers have been answered! Moving on, I would really love you to help me with finding a part-time job. As the expenses will likely shoot up in foreign land, I am willing to share the financial burden with my parents by earning some extra bucks to support my sustainability. I can take up any respectable job like restaurant waitress, cleaning staff, baby sitter or a dog keeper

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lively person you are, I hope you must be having a pretty good connection base there by now who can help me with my initiative. Will you be able to ask them if they have any part-time jobs for students? When I come over, you can introduce me to them and

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I can take over. Crossing my fingers for

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and dying to meet you as soon as I touch down. Love, Tiffany

Fri Apr 17 2020

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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8 paragraphs

213 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
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