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The table displays important information on the demographics of China, Russia, the US, and the UK.

The table displays important information on the demographics of China, Russia, the US, and the UK. Overall, China has the largest
population
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 in the four nations, but has the lowest GDP per capita. The United States of America has the highest GDP, while the United Kingdom has the most average
life
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expectancy
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. China has the highest
population
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 of around 1.4 billion and an average
life
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expectancy
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 of 75.2, but its GDP is the least in all nations of just under seven thousand dollars. The United States has the biggest GDP per capita of nearly $54
million
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, and its
population
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 is the
second
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 highest of nearly 319
million
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, the average
life
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expectancy
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 is the lowest in all countries of only 69.2. The men and women in the United Kingdom have the highest average
life
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expectancy
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 of 81.5 and have a modest amount of GDP per capita of nearly $42
million
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. Russia placed
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 to the lowest in all countries, having a
population
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 of almost 144
million
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, GDP per capita of just under $15
million
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, and an average
life
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expectancy
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 of 72.3.

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