You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter . Explain where your freind can get the key to the apartment. Give your friend some instructions about using your apartment. Recommend some places to go

Dear John, How are you, I hope you are well. I have just read your message because I was rushed on my feet. Unfortunately, I can't pick you up when you come because I will travel abroad. Actually,
this
is my annual holiday,
therefore
, I am going to travel to Paris for one month. As you know my family live in France and I planned to spend my holiday with them. Definitely, you can come and stay in
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apartment,
this
is no problem.
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, when you arrive , you can get the key with the security guy. Fortunately, he is a friendly person and you can ask him
help
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if you want . Obviously, there is a bedroom I arranged
it
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for you and there is a bathroom inside it. If you would cook, my kitchen has a great deal of equipment which help you. As well as, it is a good chance to enjoy your time, there are a large number of places in London you can visit. I recommend you to visit
London
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eye, the downtown and
Victorian
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bridge. Please don't hesitate to ask me about anything and you can contact me via WhatsApp or my mobile number. See you soon. Take care. Shimaa
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