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The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In our society currently
technology
 has changed a lot and it transformed our daily living and other resources in many ways.Some say that the network will not rule human beings, but others agree that it rules everyone and behave in a same manner and think
accordingly
.I partially disagree with the statement. On the one hand, the network helps people in many ways,
firstly
communication
 is an essential thing currently. In our daily life and in our offices
this
 is an important thing we need it every time.
For instance
 previously writing telegrams and letters to our friends and waiting for a reply
whether
Suggestion
Whether
 it reached the concerned person
also
 a question.But, now we can email our loved ones and within a minutes can reach.By
this
 we can know how our loved ones and
this
 is like thanks to
technology
.
Furthermore
this
 helped for contribution to the growth of the advancement of
technology
.
On the other hand
computing
Suggestion
Computing
 created a rift between the countries.As the advancement of
technology
 is present it stimulates growth in creating more jobs in all sectors.
For example
 In china due to increase demand of computing it creates more applications for
communication
 and entertainment.
Hence
, in all other countries, people tend to use different apps for
communication
.One of the magazine
reporter
Suggestion
reporters
 informed that they can hack our information and can misuse it.On contrast
this
 affects our economy and
also
 politics.
Furthermore
, it creates rivalry between two countries. In my perspective
,
Accept space
,
 though
technology
 has changed our lives in an easy way for
communication
 and creating more jobs.But not every individual can think in the same way and perform because, as advancement is there it can create rift between two nations.
On the contrary
, demerits cannot outweigh the merits of network.
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