Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Retirement pension is the money you receive after retiring from your company. Some individuals consider a fixed

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for all sorts of jobs

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as 65 years old would be a good policy, while others indicate despite occupations is not fair enough. They believe that an earlier

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for certain occupations is a better option. I strongly agree with it. I would explain my point of view with examples.

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with, jobs vary in different fields, and the abilities which workers require change. Take athletes and the library

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employees, for

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. Athletes usually begin their careers from the early ages, and they get involved with lots of trainings which are all energy-consuming. In order to achieve better goals, they have to keep

physical condition

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the physical condition

better.

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, library employees might use less of

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involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

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energies and consume more

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mind thinking and complicated

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works. Each job is hard in their own way.

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, physical strength got worn out as the

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grows

, the older individuals get, the less energy they would have.

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, some works take a great deal of concentration, or they would lead to danger and harm.

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, truck drivers, miners, construction workers and so on.

Construction workers' working environment

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The construction workers' working environment

is dangerous, they have to carry heavy materials, climbing up and down in spite of hot sunny days or freezing wind. If someone

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loses

has lost

is losing

concentration, tragedies would happen. Same situations with truck drivers who require great sight, and miners who need to concentrate on which mine to get. To conclude, a fixed retirement

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for all types of occupations isn't quite justice. Since the job requirements are various, retirement policies should be more flexible. Especially for the physical energy consuming, and the high-concentration jobs.

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of a set

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, they should get their pension at an earlier

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.