The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The bar chart illustrates the ratio of women, men and
children
consuming five servings of Use synonyms
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each day in 8 years from 2001 to 2008 in the UK. Use synonyms
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Overall
, it can be seen that the highest percentage of all people consuming Linking Words
fruit
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vegetables
were women, Use synonyms
while
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children
consistently accounted for the lowest proportion. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, a significant increase in the rate of people eating these food items can be seen over the period given. The percentage of women who ate Linking Words
fruit
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vegetables
started at just over 20% in 2001. Use synonyms
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then
rose steadily to reach a peak of almost 35% in 2006, before falling slightly to 30% in the final year. In terms of men and Linking Words
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eating Use synonyms
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vegetables
, the rate remained relatively stable in the first three years (about 17% and 12% respectively). From Use synonyms
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men climbed gradually to peak at about 27% in both 2006 and 2007, after which it dropped to about 26%. Correct article usage
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A similar
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children
was evident reaching 25% in 2007 and around 24% in the final year.Use synonyms
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