The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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before and after restoration.

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and the level of satisfaction both saw significant increases,

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deceased

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dramatically. As is shown by the table, the number of museum

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rose moderately, showing 74000 before the renovation, and

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climbed to 94000 after the refurbishment.

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, the amount of very satisfied and satisfied

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15% and 30% at the beginning, which

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rose

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dramatically to 35% and 40%, respectively,

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, showing 40% and 10%, their share dropped to 15% and 5%. With regards to the share of

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with no response, its percentage

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out at 5% in both periods.