The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure provided compares the total number and the level of satisfaction of Ashdown Museum
visitors
before and after restoration.
Overall
, it's clear from the pie chart that after refurbishment the total total
and the level of satisfaction both saw significant increases, Remove the redundancy
apply
while
the estimate of dissatisfied
Replace the word
dissatisfaction
deceased
dramatically.
As is shown by the table, the number of museum Correct your spelling
decreased
visitors
rose moderately, showing 74000 before the renovation, and this
figure had
climbed to 94000 after the refurbishment. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
to this
, the amount of very satisfied and satisfied visitors
were
15% and 30% at the beginning, which Correct subject-verb agreement
was
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
rose
dramatically to 35% and 40%, respectively, Change the verb form
risen
while
the opposite was true in dissatisfied and very dissatisfied amount's
, showing 40% and 10%, their share dropped to 15% and 5%. With regards to the share of Change noun form
amounts
visitors
with no response, its percentage leveled
out at 5% in both periods.Change the spelling
levelled
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