Environmenlol problems ore loo big for individuol countiles ond individuol persons fo oddress. ln olher wotds, we hove reoched fhe sloge where lhe only woy to prolecl lhe environrnenl is ol on inlernolionol level. To whot exfenl do you ogree or disogree wifh fhis opinion?

Climate change is a phenomenon affecting all

people

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all walks of life, from individual

citizens

to whole countries and huge multinational companies.

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with the notion that the only way to address

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environmental problems is at

international

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level

.

lfirmly

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believe that

this

colossal problem can only be handled if all individuals contribute; all governments take

steps

at

national

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level

and

also

join hands at an international

level

. Undoubtedly, gigantic

steps

need to be taken

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and are being taken at the international

level

. The 'COP2f in Paris in November 2015 is a step in

this

direction. The aim of 'COP2f is well known: to reach a universal agreement limiting the rise in global average temperature to 2'C above pre-industrial levels. All nations are realizing that climate change is one of the greatest challenges faced by mankind today. Many

steps

can be taken at the national

level

. Governments can aware

people

of the benefits of using

energy efficient

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devices.

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,

this

year government of

lndia

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India

gave 2 LED

bulbs

to each government employee at Rs 10/- each under the "Prakash Path" scheme. The cost of each bulb is Rs 400/-. The cost will be recovered by adding a very small amount

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each month's electricity bill for about a year. ln about 100 cities, the streetlights have been replaced with LED

bulbs

, which is a saving of a huge amount per day. LED

bulbs

use a tenth of electricity as compared to other

bulbs

. Once

people

realize that by using LED

bulbs

, their electricity bills will

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, they will be prepared to make the initial heavy investment

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also

.

Although

the international and national

level

steps

are imperative, it is

also

a fact that individual action combined with governmental action can do a lot more to prevent climate change than if individual

citizens

were not involved. ln a world of six billion

people

, if everyone stopped wasting water, disposed

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their rubbish properly, started accepting recycled material and stopped succumbing to consumerism,

then

it would go a long way in solving the problem of

environment

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. Summing up, individual

citizens

cannot sit back and say it is someone else's responsibility to protect the environment; we must all play our part - individual

citizens

and governments at the national and international

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