In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

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Various technological and scientific developments have tremendously enhanced our lifestyle and the way

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is expanding, we are expected to have a far better lifestyle in the future than the current era. We have already ushered in a new era of previously unknown and unimaginable feats of technological development and the thanks go to the scientific discovery and invention alone. Despite

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, arts, culture and traditions still have so much to teach us and

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is why we still value arts and artists. One thing arts teach us where

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is silent is the appreciation of

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. In

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, there is a little value of

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if something does not work.

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a piece of abstract

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has no meaning in

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has great stories to tell when we consider it an

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. In the world of arts,

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matter in and of themselves, whereas in

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, the only true measure is whether it works or not. The arts offer us a spiritual outlook of

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while

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teaches us just the opposite. We are surrounded by nature which is a rare combination or

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and arts. If we leave out the arts and

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of nature, it would become a dull theory of how molecules work together. To give an example, if we listen to the music of Mozart, we can learn about harmony and joy through the medium of music or if we read classic novels, the past world reveals itself to us.

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, when we look back at the stars in a dark night, we appreciate the

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and the arts have taught us to appreciate

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. The great artists tell us about the true joys of

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a classic book can teach us more about

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than a biology book can. We do not need to understand arts to appreciate music, books or

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exhibition, but we need to understand scientific theories to understand how something really works. The artists reflect

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and teach us to learn about our inner-value. When we start appreciating

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, we start living the

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to its fullest and live for others. So to say,

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and technology have made our physical world more comfortable in

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century and will keep bringing new wonders in our daily

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, arts and humanities have taught us to appreciate

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, to live for a reason.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

Fully explain your ideas

some people dislike changes in their society and in their lives,and want things to stay the same. why do some people want things to stay the same? why should change be regarded as something positive?

While some believe that the best way to learn about current events is through newspapers, others think that they can learn news better through other forms of media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?