Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The issue of accepting unwillingly deplorable condition as opposed ameliorating it has become a matter of concern for many. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will consider now. On the one hand, some people effortlessly handle unlucky accident happening in their

lifepsuch

as low earning or unappreciated job because they have a

value

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valuable

life

lesson after experiencing these. According to some study,

life

is full of morals

that is

why we totally have the right to not only make mistakes but for gaining knowledge from these

Accept space

Although

creating a seemingly impeccable blueprint, some planners cannot perform well as they anticipated because of some unexpected accidents.

However

, we all know that failure teaches success

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therefore

those who simply take up lousy issues are inclined to make massive fruitful down the road.

For example

, do you remember about your

first

job or the

first

time you had

salary which

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salary, which

was given

for

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you because of your efforts? I do remember

mine which

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mine, which

brought me

benefits

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the benefits

outweigh my scarification for it. When I was a student, I worked as a receptionist for a hostel

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The ridiculous thing is that my wage

are

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too low to pay for my living expense and I even had to borrow money from my cousin.

However

, I still worked hard everyday and what is more important than my earning is the valuable experiences and wonderful friends that I acquire from

this

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Those experiences are quite beneficial for my current career

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On the other hand

, most of suffers cannot bear with the unfair or harsh situations and give effort to overcome these because they have to stand up for their benefits

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For example

, we should consider wisely and prudently about our future when we are taken rights and must live like a slave. If that day truly come, will we accept it and serve for

powerful man

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the powerful man

rather than making a revolution to take back what we have lost? Have you ever heard about Cinderella story? If Cinderella obeys her stepmother, she never gets a chance to meet her prince - her adorable husband who protects her for the rest of her

life

. In fact, an underdog comes from behind can totally take the throne away from long - standing

powerfulman

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powerful man

just because he or she doesn't accept his or her poor condition.

That is

why we have to never stop learning and find as

much

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many

opportunities as possible to respond to bad situation or even failure so that we don't give up or feel too depressed. We must remember that calamity is man's true touchstone.l Overall, I feel that difficult is an indispensable part of

life but

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life, but

we have to respond

positive

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positively

whenever these occur. Resisting hardness is

important trait

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an important trait

to become a successful person.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

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466 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Would you rather visit the moon or the sun? What would you do there

some people think that the olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. others say the olympics is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

in the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before. What do you think are the main causes of this difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.