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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are different views of local societies about
escalation
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the escalation
 of supermarkets in different countries. The number of large
unit
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units
 of
super market
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
 is typically dominated on local communities over the
last
 decades. While I agree that government should eye on
this
 typical situation and cater the local communities.
Firstly
, Supermarket is the most beneficial place for buying different products under the one roof.
Furthermore
, many industries, business men and shopkeeper
also purchases
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also purchase
 product on bulk quantity of their businesses. For a
verity
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
 of reasons, several families that do not want to buy products from local shops on account of
inadequacy
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the inadequacy
 of variety, and some people think supermarket product rates are cheaper as compare to
local shop
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local shops
the local shop
. While a small number of people
gets
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get
 attractive on
different scheme
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a different scheme
 of supermarkets.
In contrast
, the reverse situation was found that a large community of local business men experience decreased while supermarket increased rapidly. On account of
this
, many stores and shops have been closed that enlarge the unemployment ratio too. Notwithstanding, a majority of people are still surviving hardly to expand their businesses, because, it is very essential for the government to forming the criteria of business and entice to the local community that eventually would help
to
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with
country’s development
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the country’s development
. To summarize,
supermarket
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a supermarket
 is the best place for easy buying in your comfort with
different verity
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a different variety
a different verity
 of products, meanwhile government should
encourage to local
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encourage local
 businesses too.
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