2- In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

In

modern era

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the modern era

, there

is

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are

many aspects of using technology revolution in political ways one of them is

camcorder

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a camcorder

. While there are some disadvantages in

this

method, I believe its advantages have more strength. Admittedly, there are minor demerits of recording every scene in streets, parks, companies and even elevators.

Firstly

, it can decrease personal privacy of

people

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people, for

for

example during

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example, during

eating and talking to each other in a restaurant. In consequence making them uncomfortable.

secondly

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Secondly

,

camera

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the camera

can only cover limited areas because it is artificial with specific angles

consequently

it can not record every single motion happened in the area.

Thirdly

,

although

these

camera

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cameras

has been put to reduce criminal attacks

such

as stealing, many thieves can vandalize cameras in many

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ways, for

for instance

adjust the

camera

angles, spray the

cameras'

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camera

camera's

lens and even sticking it by gum.

However

, I believe that merits of television

camera

can overcome all of those.

Initially

, surveillance cameras in public spaces can significantly improve

safety

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the safety

of

public

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the public

and reduce

crime rate

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the crime rate

crime rates

to illustrate that in supermarkets with cameras have less stealing incidence.

Additionally

,

this

technique with its value of gathering evidence and clues can be used in tracking the crime and reach the criminals.

Further

, cameras

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on

streets can be used for controlling road traffics to reduce congestion and prevent drivers from cutting the light signals and over-speeding as

result

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a result

the result

of these minimizing the traffic accidents. To conclude, in my personal view the positive points of visual

recording including

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recording, including

maintaining safety, detecting criminals in shorter time and

remoting

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removing

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traffics are more noticeable than basic negative points that might be associated with it.