Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?
Over
past decades
, Suggestion
the past decades
energy
consumption has never failed to draw public’s attention
and provoke the bates. It is warned that Suggestion
the public’s attention
environment
would be Suggestion
the environment
exaggerate
Suggestion
exaggerating
damange
if people continuous the occurrence of a change for the worse
damage
use
energy
supply for their daily life. There are two main reasons: development of transportation and residential and commercial needs. Possible solution
is to add carbon tax and Suggestion
A possible solution
The possible solution
use
renewable energy
.
One reason people are ignoring the environment
protection is the development of private means of transportation such
as car, motorbikes, so on. This
is because people are living in busy
life, it is more convenient to own the private Suggestion
are living in a busy
care
a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
car
instead
of waiting for long time
at Suggestion
a long time
bus stop
or train station. It has been found that the United State, with less than 5% of the world’s population, is home to more than one-fifth of the world’s automobiles. To tackle Suggestion
the bus stop
a bus stop
this
issue, the gorvenment
should discourage personal vehicle the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
use
by adding higher carbon tax
on the private means of transportation. Suggestion
a higher carbon tax
Therefore
, the consumers will then
become more energy
-efficient, futher
curbing greenhouse gas emission and to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
mitigrate
the global warming.
Another problem is that the lessen or to try to lessen the seriousness or extent of
mitigate
energy
comsumption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
for
housing and commercial building. All the activities mainly depend on Suggestion
of
energy
such
as we keeps rooms at a comfortable temperature, illuminate our spaces, heat water for bathing and laundry, and rely on computers, and other technologies. The research has showed
that residential and commercial Suggestion
has shown
use
accounted for 40% of the energy
consumed in the Viet Nam in 2010. To solve this
problem, renewable energy
like solar energy
, wind power is alternative options to reduce energy
comsumption
. If the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
this
is implemented it would be one contributing element towards a solution for climate change and the adverse impacts are not linear.
In a nutshell, the affect
of human-generated emission on a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
environment
should be overlooked. Both government and Suggestion
the environment
idviduals
should take the action to protect the a human being
individuals
environment
, lessen the greenhouse gas. Unless this
action taken on, the the
definite article
the
environment
issue will aggravate in the future.Submitted by tam.nb8454 on
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