Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?

Over
past decades
Suggestion
the past decades
,
energy
consumption has never failed to draw
public’s attention
Suggestion
the public’s attention
and provoke the bates. It is warned that
environment
Suggestion
the environment
would be
exaggerate
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exaggerating
damange
the occurrence of a change for the worse
damage
if people continuous
use
energy
supply for their daily life. There are two main reasons: development of transportation and residential and commercial needs.
Possible solution
Suggestion
A possible solution
The possible solution
is to add carbon tax and
use
renewable
energy
. One reason people are ignoring the
environment
protection is the development of private means of transportation
such
as car, motorbikes, so on.
This
is because people
are living in busy
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are living in a busy
life, it is more convenient to own the private
care
a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
car
instead
of waiting for
long time
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a long time
at
bus stop
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the bus stop
a bus stop
or train station. It has been found that the United State, with less than 5% of the world’s population, is home to more than one-fifth of the world’s automobiles. To tackle
this
issue, the
gorvenment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should discourage personal vehicle
use
by adding
higher carbon tax
Suggestion
a higher carbon tax
on the private means of transportation.
Therefore
, the consumers will
then
become more
energy
-efficient,
futher
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
curbing greenhouse gas emission and
mitigrate
lessen or to try to lessen the seriousness or extent of
mitigate
the global warming. Another problem is that the
energy
comsumption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
for
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of
housing and commercial building. All the activities mainly depend on
energy
such
as we keeps rooms at a comfortable temperature, illuminate our spaces, heat water for bathing and laundry, and rely on computers, and other technologies. The research
has showed
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has shown
that residential and commercial
use
accounted for 40% of the
energy
consumed in the Viet Nam in 2010. To solve
this
problem, renewable
energy
like solar
energy
, wind power is alternative options to reduce
energy
comsumption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
. If
this
is implemented it would be one contributing element towards a solution for climate change and the adverse impacts are not linear. In a nutshell, the
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
of human-generated emission on
environment
Suggestion
the environment
should be overlooked. Both government and
idviduals
a human being
individuals
should take the action to protect the
environment
, lessen the greenhouse gas. Unless
this
action taken on,
the the
definite article
the
environment
issue will aggravate in the future.
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