Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?

Over

past decades

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the past decades

,

energy

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consumption has never failed to draw

public’s attention

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the public’s attention

and provoke the bates. It is warned that

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environment

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the environment

would be

exaggerate

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exaggerating

damange

the occurrence of a change for the worse

damage

if people continuous

use

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energy

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supply for their daily life. There are two main reasons: development of transportation and residential and commercial needs.

Possible solution

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A possible solution

The possible solution

is to add carbon tax and

use

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renewable

energy

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. One reason people are ignoring the

environment

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protection is the development of private means of transportation

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as car, motorbikes, so on.

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is because people

are living in busy

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are living in a busy

life, it is more convenient to own the private

care

a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine

car

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of waiting for

long time

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a long time

at

bus stop

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the bus stop

a bus stop

or train station. It has been found that the United State, with less than 5% of the world’s population, is home to more than one-fifth of the world’s automobiles. To tackle

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issue, the

gorvenment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

should discourage personal vehicle

use

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by adding

higher carbon tax

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a higher carbon tax

on the private means of transportation.

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, the consumers will

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become more

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-efficient,

futher

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

curbing greenhouse gas emission and

mitigrate

lessen or to try to lessen the seriousness or extent of

mitigate

the global warming. Another problem is that the

energy

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comsumption

the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)

consumption

for

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of

housing and commercial building. All the activities mainly depend on

energy

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as we keeps rooms at a comfortable temperature, illuminate our spaces, heat water for bathing and laundry, and rely on computers, and other technologies. The research

has showed

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has shown

that residential and commercial

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accounted for 40% of the

energy

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consumed in the Viet Nam in 2010. To solve

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problem, renewable

energy

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like solar

energy

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, wind power is alternative options to reduce

energy

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comsumption

the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)

consumption

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is implemented it would be one contributing element towards a solution for climate change and the adverse impacts are not linear. In a nutshell, the

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

of human-generated emission on

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environment

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the environment

should be overlooked. Both government and

idviduals

a human being

individuals

should take the action to protect the

environment

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, lessen the greenhouse gas. Unless

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action taken on,

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the

environment

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issue will aggravate in the future.