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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

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Nowadays people more often
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 from
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 because of advances in the technologies. In general, I would argue that has more negative impacts than positive.  On the one hand, companies have access to a wider pool of applicants -
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 as those from more geographically remote areas. Working from
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 is the freedom due to workers would have a private atmosphere and feel comfortable and free. Employers which
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 at
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 can organise their
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 around their
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 life due to  as they can start
work
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 as they need,
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, they have children, they can easily pick them up from a school. They can
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 perform any other tasks that they need to do during the day,
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 as a laundry or cooking. They have more energy for
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 due to the don't spend time on the road. The
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 of these is many staffs becomes lazier because they have more hours at
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 and they often get up late. 
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, who
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 at
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 will not communicate with colleagues.
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 may lead to people won't learn experiences from their colleagues, boost their  skills
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 as communication and teamwork, which is really important for the development of the company, so working from
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 suits some personality types but not others. Some people may prefer colleague contact by face to face communication. Your company can have an information security risk - information security problems could be more likely to occur. In conclusion,
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 there are positives and negatives related to working from
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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