A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Tourism

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has been expanding for the

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half a

century which

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century, which

plays

significant role

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a significant role

in

development

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the development

of the national

economy

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of the many countries in the world,

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it adversely affects to

environment

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the environment

too.

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essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of

tourism

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and furnish a conclusion. The main advantages of improving

tourism

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industry are the stimulating of the countries’

economy

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and a huge number of new work places for local residences. At

first

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, tourists are ready to waste loads of money on a wide range of services like transportation, accommodation, entertainments, food and medical services. It provides a great chance to the countries to make the tremendous incomes for the

economy

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.

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, local citizens supplying several kinds of services are able to make earnings.

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, taxi drivers, café and restaurant workers, hotel staffs, tour guides, interpreters, personnel of beauty salons, encouraging owners of business to employ significant numbers of people for these positions.

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,

tourism

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has some kind of disadvantages that provide inconvenient conditions to the social

milieu especially

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milieu, especially

to the national historic sites and marine and coastal environments which are frequently visited places by tourists. Ancient constructions, castles and mausoleums are liable to attend by

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the vast amount

a vast amount

of visitors and get injured. Natural resources become

overexploited

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when tourist attractions are overcrowded.

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addition these

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addition, these

places where animated inrush of tourists are convenient to make some criminals like a despoliation and drug dealing. Though, expedient management of

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tourism industry

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the tourism industry

and sustainable use of resources by the local government can dispose of these disadvantages. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that

tourism

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has some disadvantages like damage effects and increase of

country’s crime rate

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the country’s crime rate

, it has a significant influence on

economy

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of loads of countries and ensures

enormous number

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an enormous number

the enormous number

of new work places for the local inhabitants. I suppose

profits

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the profits

of

tourism

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outweigh its flaws.