Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poor nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
The development in a
country
is often measured in terms of its health care infrastructure, educational system and foreign trades. A nation is said to be developing or poor or third
world based on aforementioned three criteria.
Firstly
, If we consider the example of India, It is considered as an emerging economy that stands at 7th rank in the world. The health care facilities, education system and foreign trades of India may be inferior to USA, UK or China, but are better when compared to less developed countries such
as Pakistan or Bangladesh. Secondly
, with good initiatives such
as Foreign Direct Investments (FDI) the rich or developed countries invest in Indian companies, hence
enabling them to grow along with investors. Morever
, with providing financial aid generated a necessity of compliance and monitoring in addition
Moreover
also
arises as these funds can be often misused in illegal activities such
as weapon procurement, terrorism funding or self gains by individuals of that country
. A recurring or surprise audit activity can cope up with these issues. The audit can ensure proper use of funds for the betterment of the country
.
In a nutshell governments of rich countries should definitely help poor countries in the development of their basic infrastructure, but should also
keep an eye on the use of funds provided by them.It is very much necessary for a country
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite