Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are important for education and conservation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the recent years, zoos

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have become

and increasing popular tourist attractions in many major cities

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as London and Paris. There are several people who think that it is pointless to close these animals in

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zoos, however

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many thinks that zoos plays a crucial role in education and conservations.

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essay will discuss some benefits of keeping animals in zoos and

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the reason I disagree

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about

having a

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, zoos

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are

a place which consists of different animals from all places around the globe and it serve an important role in education. Young children are able to learn about the types of animals and the origin of different animals and even learn about the animals that will face extinction soon.

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, when I visited the

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of London a few years back,

i

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I

saw groups of British students visited the

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with their teachers. All of them have their own task distributed

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as animals linking and they

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seem

interested to learn by completing those challenging

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tasks

. Being able to educate youngsters that haven’t seen certain animals in their life is an important existence of

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. But not everyone agrees to cage those creatures in

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zoos, including

me as it is enormously cruel to put animals apart from their families and lock them in cages. Most of the animals are forced to live in a small area and some even suffer from hunger. Some animals

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as gorilla with 200 cm in height are being captivated into a cage that are only 180 cm tall and it

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doesn’t have

enough room to move itself. Studies showed that more than 60% of

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the creatures

from the zoos suffered from mental illness

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as claustrophobia. It can be seen that closing animals into cages are extremely cruel and inhumane. In summary, the highly demanded zoos seems to have both positive and negative sides of it.

This

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essay discussed the importance of zoos for education, but

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the cruelty of locking up animals in small cages in zoos. In my opinion, I think that animals should not be kept in zoos and they should be returned to their own home for freedom .