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“As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time.” Do you agree or not?

#“as #computers #languages #waste #time
Today, many people who
use
 the technology have a lot of opportunities,
such
 as following all news, learning new
language
etc. Briefl
Suggestion
new languages
y, they can reach many conveniences. Nowadays, when people need it, they
use
,
in addition
 the rate of people who
use
 translation that are increasing and some of them think that if computers translate quickly, learning foreign
language
 is a waste of time. I totally disagree
this
 view. I strongly believe that learning a
language
 improves their communication skills and body
language
.
Also
, it provides connection with international people easily.
First
 of all, people should learn a
language
 completely. It provides many privilege fo
r a perso
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privileges
n which improves their communication skills and when they communicate with a person, they should
use
 body
language
.
However
, some of people who think as a waste of time
use
 computers translate. It is not correct because artificial intelligence can never be completely self-explanatory because every
language
 has different nuances.
On the other hand
, everybody knows that a
language
 helps us with many wa
ys;
Suggestion
in
for instance
, people do international trade with other countries and they need a
language
 for good relationship. People who want to succeed in every area, they should accomplish learning a
language
.
Also
, when people have connection w
ith intern
Suggestion
connected
ational people, they can broaden their horizons because they learn foreign culture, society and new flavours. All in all, people should learning a
l
anguage
Suggestion
learn
instead
 of using translate from all reasons above.
This
 way always impro
ve themselves
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always improves
because speaking a foreign
language
 is gotten new c
ommuni
Suggestion
getting
cation skills and improves body
language
. What is more, they can contact with international people in every association.

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