Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
One
good way to promote world
peace
is through international sporting events. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Every world
leader hopes and trys
to gain make an effort or attempt
tries
try
world
peace
in different ways.They realise that international sports events are the most suitable plan to become peaceful condition
among different countries.
Not only sports but Suggestion
a peaceful condition
alsao
other events can perform a in addition
also
peace
between two different nations.But sports are one
of the most perfrommances
for every countrya dramatic or musical entertainment
performance
.
Accept space
.
For example
, the Olampic
sports make many nations of or relating to the Olympic Games
Olympic
inspirated
as many as possible across the being of such surpassing excellence as to suggest inspiration by the gods
inspired
world
. Every athlete competes to participate the international sports events yearly.Only selected or qulified
players meeting the proper standards and requirements and training for an office or position or task
qualified
o rathletes
enough can join in Suggestion
or athletes
such
big games.
Thinking about international sports events,
win or loss is not the main pointAccept space
,
,
but Accept space
,
the more important
key to accept any Suggestion
the most important
resulthonestly
whether win or not. That shows the nature of humanity how
very beautiful their Suggestion
of humanity, how
behaviors
.manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
Although
everybody cannot take part in such
sports tournaments,
there is Accept space
,
one
thing we shouls
know is that expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
one
who is selected represents instead
of his mother country.That also
proves that everybody participate in such
situations to love and make peace
one
another
country.
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
On the other hand
,
unless Accept space
,
world
leaders held such
performances for all their citizens,
how can there become Accept space
,
convinent
between different countries?By observing today suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
covenant
continent
world
condition,
superpower countries never Accept space
,
ceaseabout
their serious contendingSuggestion
cease about
,
particularly different sorts of weapons and technology. Even at presentAccept space
,
,
COVID-19 Accept space
,
pandemic which
is made by human virologists cause virus outbreak and many people around the Accept comma addition
pandemic, which
world
are suffering that disease.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement about that international sporting events can build stronger relatioship
a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
betweenw
wide ranges of nations Suggestion
between w
onthis
planet.Suggestion
on this
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