The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given line graph compares the amount
og
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of
good
transported Fix the agreement mistake
goods
ny
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by
road
,Fix the agreement mistake
roads
water
, rail and pipeline in the uk
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UK
during
1974 to 2002.
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from
Overall
,the highest quantities of good was
shipped Change the verb form
were
via
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by
road
whereas
pipeline remained tge
least commonly used mode of Correct your spelling
the
transportation
.
As can be seen from the line Change preposition
on the
the
graph,70 Correct article usage
apply
milion
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million
tonnez
of commodities were transported by Correct your spelling
tonnes
road
in 1974 and this quantities
increased to about 97 Change the determiner
this quantity
these quantities
milion
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million
tonnez
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tonnes
at the end
of period
(2002),Correct article usage
the period
while
pipeline
started with 1 Correct article usage
the pipeline
milion
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million
tonnes
of goods in 1974.Change to a singular noun
tonne
This
figure rose 20
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by 20
milion
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million
tonnes
of good
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goods
were
delivered in the year 2002.
Unnecessary verb
apply
According to
the given line graph,Rail and water
transported 40 milion
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million
tonnes
of commodies
in 1974 and Correct your spelling
commodities
this
quantity had some changes .In details
,the Fix the agreement mistake
detail
amount
of goods Change the quantifier
number
were
shipped via Change the verb form
was
water
went up about
62 Change preposition
by about
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million
milion
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million
tonnes
in 2002 while
rail still Correct your spelling
maintained
mantained
the same figure Correct your spelling
maintained
of
the year 1974 (40 Change preposition
as
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million
milion
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million
tonnes
) before had
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apply
the
decrease from 1986 to 1994 (35 Correct article usage
a
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million
milion
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million
tonnes
of goods)
In conclusion,road
transportation
and water
transportation
carried more quantities than 2 transportation
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, water, transportation, milion, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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