The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the given line graph compares the amount

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good

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goods

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transported

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road

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roads

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water

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, rail and pipeline in the

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during

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from

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1974 to 2002.

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,the highest quantities of good

was

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shipped

via

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road

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whereas

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pipeline remained

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the

least commonly used mode of

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. As can be seen from the line

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the

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graph,70

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milion

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million

tonnez

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tonnes

of commodities were transported by

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in 1974 and

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this quantities

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increased to about 97

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milion

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million

tonnez

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tonnes

at the end

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period

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(2002),

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pipeline

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the pipeline

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started with 1

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milion

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million

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tonnes

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of goods in 1974.

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figure rose

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by 20

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milion

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million

tonnes

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good

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goods

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were

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delivered in the year 2002.

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the given line graph,Rail and

water

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transported 40

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milion

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million

tonnes

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commodies

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commodities

in 1974 and

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quantity had some changes .In

details

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amount

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of goods

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shipped via

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went up

about

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by about

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million

milion

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in 2002

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rail still

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maintained

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maintained

the same figure

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the year 1974 (40

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million

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) before

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decrease from 1986 to 1994 (35

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million

milion

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of goods) In conclusion,

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transportation

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and

water

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transportation

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carried more quantities than 2

transportation

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left.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, water, transportation, milion, tonnes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 7 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Overview
Trend
Fluctuation
Peak
Trough
Increase
Decrease
Stability
Mode of transport
Quantity
Comparison
Goods
Transported
Significant
Noticeable
General trend
Time span

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Nowadays, in some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are effects on society and family life?

Many people believe that the high levels of violance in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced.