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Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects, but other people believe that teenagers should focus on those subjects which are good or interesting.

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There is split opinion regarding selection of
school
 subjects.
Although
 according to some people all
school
 subjects should be focused by teenagers, other layman says that students should concentrate on some subjects which are
intreresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
. I
emphasise
Suggestion
have emphasised
 both approaches before making my final note in
this
 essay. To commence with, there are
number
Suggestion
a number
 of ascendancy to learn all subjects. Most profound one is that children who can get some
knowledge
 of all
school
 subjects. To buttress view, if students obtain some information about all subjects,
then
 they will perform well and secure admission in
good college
Suggestion
a good college
,
Accept space
,
which is
essencial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
 for making good career. One more advantage is that they will give
good lesson
Suggestion
a good lesson
 to their children. To add, if people have good
knowledge
 of all subjects,
then
 they give good
knowledge
 without
pay
Suggestion
paying
 extra money
of
Suggestion
on
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
 classes to their children.
For example
,
India where
Accept comma addition
India, where
 almost all parents provide better
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
 at home to their children, because they have depth
knowledge
 of all
school
 subjects. Alternatively, along with all subjects, there are some supremacy of learning some
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
 subjects.
First
 and foremost, since pupils can more concentrate on
single
Suggestion
a single subject
subject
 without feel burden of other subjects, they will achieve mastery in
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
 subjects. Without
feel
Suggestion
feeling
 burden student can spend more time with valuable subjects.
Therefore
, they can do deep research in limited subjects. Beside
this
, if
pupil
Suggestion
the pupil
a pupil
have
Suggestion
has
 excellent
knowledge
 regarding vital subjects,
then
 they will not face
unemployment problem
Suggestion
an unemployment problem
.
For instance
, 95% of the students had been achieved better job because of their mastery in
single
Suggestion
single subjects
a single subject
subject
. Henceforth to conclude, by all
school
 subjects, the students can secure deep
knowledge
 and spread positive
knowledge
 to their children,
although
 single
subjects though
Accept comma addition
subjects, though
 which children can more focus on
subject
Suggestion
the subject
 and acquire mastery in
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
subject
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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