The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the samepark today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps compare the layout of a public
park
called
Grane
a relatively small granular particle of a substance
grain
Greene
crane
in its opening year 1920 and as it is now. It is clear that apart from the rose
garden
in the Northwest and the two entrances, the rest of the
park
’s features
has been
Suggestion
have been
completely replaced. Both in the two maps, visitors can access
Grane
of the color between blue and yellow in the color spectrum; similar to the color of fresh grass
green
grange
grant
park
either through the entrance on the Arnold Avenue side or the one on the Eldon street side.
Also
, a new underground parking area has been built, which can be approached through the entrance on the East side. Of the three rose
garderns
a plot of ground where plants are cultivated
gardens
in 1920, only the
garden
on
Suggestion
in
the Northwest remains unchanged. Major transformations can be seen in other features.
Firstly
, in the middle of the
park
, a large rose
garden
has been grown on the place where the fountain was previously placed.
In addition
to
this
, seats were organized around four sides of the
garden
instead
of being allocated at different corners of the
park
.
Moreover
, major changes include the conversion of the musicians’ stage into an amphitheatre with greater capacity, the replacement of the glass house by the water feature, and the development of a playground for children.
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